ah this game was nice! Not only is the love interest a dilf but he was also so so sweet and wonderful. I loved the dynamic where they both trusted each other but also bantered
I just finished playing and omg, what you cooked was delicious! I ate well π Seriously, I crushed for Ramon since almost the beginning and then I fell for him, and then... everything was tied up nicely, and heartwarming, and with the right amount of spiciness π₯°.
I loved the resolution with Atlas too. In fact, I'm not against a spinoff with him π.
I still hate the king, though π.
Thank you for making this game. The CGs, backgrounds and music are good too. Sorry, I only have good things to say xD And thank you for uploading it in full for free, I really appreciate it as I currently have no income and couldn't have afforded it.
Edit: btw, how do I unlock the 2 cut-ins? π I followed the instruction of choosing first the cuddle scene, but I didn't see anything afterwards besides the main CGs.
i fully expected to be obsessed with ramon (duh) but i did not expect how much i'd love atlas too!! i really liked how That Conversation went, it was very satisfying. also him talking with ramon, that was amusing lol
really love the art for everything too, especially that one of ramon, when uh... the tables are turned. π swear my face was gonna melt off from how hard i blushed.
anyway! yes. everything about this is wonderful. i love it so, so much π€π€π€
YES AND YES THIS GAME IS AMAZAING!!! I just finished playing and l LOVE IT SO MUCH. Loved the endings, loved the music, the art, everything was amazing. Thank you for coming up with this masterpiece.
It was a great game! Overall I loved and enjoyed the game. Ramon having an ex lover was endearing and rather cute! I enjoyed being able switch the roles of dom! I am a fan of angst so I was secretly hoping to have the choice to decide if I died in the war or not as a ending scene... (tragic IKKK) I really loved the fact we were able to make up with atlas and show a true sibling bond. Such a lovely game and I've already downloaded several other works from you! Hoping for more to come!!
Hi...me again... I LOVE THIS SO MUCH YOU DONT UNDERSTAND! I LOVED CHAPTER 3, I LOVED HOW MUCH MORE EMOTIONAL IT WAS, HOW VULNERABLE RAMON WAS! (even Atlas and Lysandra) IT BROUGHT TEARS TO MY EYESHDBDHHD. I won't make this as long as my last post, but I loved this, like extremely. I loved how Ramon opened up about Alexander (doomed).... (Achilles and Patroclus core) ... and allowed himself to be happy again (β₯οΉβ₯). This is a game I can totally see myself replaying, just because it's very heartfelt. ALSO, I CACKLED WHEN ATLAS THREATENED RAMON LOLLL. Overall, I love everything just as much, maybe more than before. Everyone did amazingly ^^ I ALSO LOVEEEE THE ARTTTT. flowers for everyone...
HIIII KITTY!!! Always nice seeing you again! Thanks for playing chapter 3, was waiting to see your thoughts on it and I'm glad we didn't disappoint, haha!
Hey! So sorry about your game not working. Can you please tell me where in the game you started experiencing the issue or what the report says, since you can't post it?
wow, the demo rules!! showing the royal family, knights, etc. as blacked-out silhouettes is such a stylish and intriguing choice -- in the same way the protagonist gets lost in their own head about what might be, never seeing these characters' expressions makes me wonder how much negativity (ex: atlas's ulterior motives for bringing them dinner) actually comes from the protagonist's skewed perspective.
also, i've never seen the 'music room' implemented before, the styling is amazing! the OST is great and the song thumbnails are super cute too!
First, I just want to say how good the writing is, I LOVE complex emotions and themes in a story! ALSO, I love how kind of motivating it is as well? It's very understandable why Lysandra hates her brother and holds resentment towards her family overall. I honestly feel bad for both of them in this situation, just a terrible part on the parent's end honestly.
HOWEVER, I LOVE HOW DEEP RAMON'S WORDS HIT. Especially for people who need to hear it. Imagine just hopping on here expecting to play a cool looking story and you're just hit with words and the motivation you needed to hear? (guilty).
But I LOVE this! I love how the characters are written, I love the design of Ramon, I love how deep the writing is, how entertaining it is, I love rooting for Lysandra, and I love the slow romance as well. It's like she feels seen by someone for the first time in her life and its SOOO SWEET! This is one of the few things I've played that can sit right with me and change my perspective on things, even if it doesn't seem that deep (thinking deeply is fun) SO TYSM AND IM EXCITED FOR THE FULL GAME! ^^ (I'm just yapping apt)
I FORGOT TO ADD THAT I HATE THEIR PARENTS THEYRE SO TERRIBLE AND INSENSITIVE. BOOOOO!
also, me during the intimate scenes between Lysandra and Ramon... (sorry, I found this funny)
Thank you so much for the wonderful, kind words, kitty! When it came to writing Lysandra, I wanted to write a woman conflicted with her familial situation. On one hand, her parents have provided a lot of material things for her and if you do self-insert, don't judge them for queer (the kingdom's very progressive), and food/shelter. These are things she's grateful for.
At the same time, a lot of attention given to Atlas. Her family never gave her that kind of attention, and whenever they spoke of Atlas or the pair, there was always some reminder of MC's "inferiority." She just felt less than all because he was older and the next heir. And they never asked what was wrong, and you can see that when Lysandra's Father spoke to her in Chapter 2. Rather than trying to understand why she didn't eat in the first place, he got upset and reminded her that it made them look bad and that they provide everything for her. The Mother is... interesting because in MC's head, she believes she would say it's okay to give up when times get hard instead of persevering, like she doesn't believe in her.
You'll see more of Atlas in chapter 3 so I won't talk about him. BUT YES RAMON! Ramon is someone that Lysandra needs in her life (and he also needs her) because he gives her the support she's been looking for: he's tough, encouraging, supportive, attentive, a good listener, and knows when to soften up. It's what makes him a great knight and leader: he knows that straight up discipline and constant reprimanding only breaks a person down rather than build them up. He's a good balance.
HAHAHAH!!! The intimacy scenes are quite delicious. As an asexual gal who's written 3 spicy scenes before this game, I'm quite proud of what I wrote for this game because I killed two people on the team with them. π Though I have a huge bias towards the cuddle/ace-friendly option and I think it's JUST AS GOOD IF NOT BETTER!!!
Again, thank you for your kind words. I showed the team what you said and they were so happy after reading your comment and review. π
OFC! and THANK YOU guys for making such a masterpiece! HAHA IM HAPPY MY WORDS BROUGHT THEM HAPPINESS AS WELL! I just love Lysandra's motivation to keep going even if it's hard, and I totally agree with the whole Ramon is a good balance, (forgot to add how I feel bad for Atlas and ty for the clarification ^^). BUT ILL STOP HERE BEFORE I YAP AGAIN, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!! <3<3<3
I love this game so much ! even if it's not the full version it's amazing, i can't for the full release i'm so excited, and Ramon is so handsome ! this game is a 10/10 <3
π₯Ήπ Thank you so much for the wonderful comment! I'm really glad you're loving the game so far. And haha yes, Ramon is SO HANDSOME! Though if you thought he was hot now, just wait until chapter 3...
I'm conflicted, I like the game, I can understand why the Mc acts the way they do, but I almost dropped the game a few seconds into playing because of just how much of an annoying brat they act like. I hope they mature and have character growth.
Im a fan of these types of games, the worst part is, is the fact its not done! any updates on when you think it will be done or when the next chapt will be out?
The relationship between Lysandra and Ramon feels so natural and I looooove how it starts developing into romance!!
I also love Lysandra so much!! The way she's written feels so human; I really like how she can be a bit of an unreliable narrator at times when it comes to her brother, thinking that "he's just pretending to be nice" when in reality it doesn't feel like that at all.
Their parents though? Oh man, they suck!!
I really love how Ramon also makes Lysandra let her mask fall and she doesn't have to pretend with him, she can just be herself!!
I'm really invested in the story and really looking forward to Chapter 3!!
AHHHHH!!! Thank you for playing the demo and for the kind words, Pri. ππ
Glad you're enjoying Ramon and MC's chemistry. When writing them, I really wanted to lean into the guiding aspect and show that BOTH can play that role. You'll see MC take more of that role in chapter 3 as Ramon begins to open up more with her because he feels safe around her (like she does with him) which terrifies him for reasons explained later.
Yes! Atlas is an interesting fellow that's misunderstood by his sister because of the one-sided animosity built up over the years. You'll get a peek into what his life is like in chapter 3. ;)
Super interested in hearing your thoughts on chapter 3 when it drops next month. Thanks again for playing! π
β Return to game
Comments
Log in with itch.io to leave a comment.
I love him... I LOVE HIM
live laugh love ramon !! <333
What a charming silver fox
gurl this is my jam!
I'm blushing hahahaa.. i love this story πππ
ah this game was nice! Not only is the love interest a dilf but he was also so so sweet and wonderful. I loved the dynamic where they both trusted each other but also bantered
Oh my god, this game looks beautiful. Is it in Spanish? English isn't my native language, and I don't speak it very well.
I just finished playing and omg, what you cooked was delicious! I ate well π Seriously, I crushed for Ramon since almost the beginning and then I fell for him, and then... everything was tied up nicely, and heartwarming, and with the right amount of spiciness π₯°.
I loved the resolution with Atlas too. In fact, I'm not against a spinoff with him π.
I still hate the king, though π.
Thank you for making this game. The CGs, backgrounds and music are good too. Sorry, I only have good things to say xD And thank you for uploading it in full for free, I really appreciate it as I currently have no income and couldn't have afforded it.
Edit: btw, how do I unlock the 2 cut-ins? π I followed the instruction of choosing first the cuddle scene, but I didn't see anything afterwards besides the main CGs.
every single day since i played the demo i have returned, waiting with bated breath for the last chapter....
AND IT WAS ABSOLUTE PERFECTION I AM SCREAMING
such a gentle depiction of grief and anxiety, beautifully portrayed demi-sexual adjacent slow burn, and just over all a charming visual novel
ty dev for letting us smooch the charming old man, 10/10 would smooch again<3
this is SO good. oh my heart π
i fully expected to be obsessed with ramon (duh) but i did not expect how much i'd love atlas too!! i really liked how That Conversation went, it was very satisfying. also him talking with ramon, that was amusing lol
really love the art for everything too, especially that one of ramon, when uh... the tables are turned. π
swear my face was gonna melt off from how hard i blushed.anyway! yes. everything about this is wonderful. i love it so, so much π€π€π€
I love this old man so much
YES AND YES THIS GAME IS AMAZAING!!! I just finished playing and l LOVE IT SO MUCH. Loved the endings, loved the music, the art, everything was amazing. Thank you for coming up with this masterpiece.
UGHHHH CAN'T WAIT TO PLAY!! .β€οΈβ€οΈβ€οΈ
Been so excited and waiting for the full game to come out, and know it 's gonna be sooo worth it! Just downloaded it again and can't wait to play
It was a great game! Overall I loved and enjoyed the game. Ramon having an ex lover was endearing and rather cute! I enjoyed being able switch the roles of dom! I am a fan of angst so I was secretly hoping to have the choice to decide if I died in the war or not as a ending scene... (tragic IKKK) I really loved the fact we were able to make up with atlas and show a true sibling bond. Such a lovely game and I've already downloaded several other works from you! Hoping for more to come!!
WILL THERE BEE PaTREON EXCLUSIVE SCENES???!!!
Nope! All content is accessible in the full, public release of the game. :)
Hi...me again... I LOVE THIS SO MUCH YOU DONT UNDERSTAND! I LOVED CHAPTER 3, I LOVED HOW MUCH MORE EMOTIONAL IT WAS, HOW VULNERABLE RAMON WAS! (even Atlas and Lysandra) IT BROUGHT TEARS TO MY EYESHDBDHHD. I won't make this as long as my last post, but I loved this, like extremely. I loved how Ramon opened up about Alexander (doomed).... (Achilles and Patroclus core) ... and allowed himself to be happy again (β₯οΉβ₯). This is a game I can totally see myself replaying, just because it's very heartfelt. ALSO, I CACKLED WHEN ATLAS THREATENED RAMON LOLLL. Overall, I love everything just as much, maybe more than before. Everyone did amazingly ^^ I ALSO LOVEEEE THE ARTTTT. flowers for everyone...
HIIII KITTY!!! Always nice seeing you again! Thanks for playing chapter 3, was waiting to see your thoughts on it and I'm glad we didn't disappoint, haha!
AND THANK YOU FOR THE FLOWERSSSS. π
AWWW THATS SO SWEET IM VERY GLAD YOU GUYS WANTED MY INPUT! YOURE WELCOME! KEEP BEING GREAT β(α΅αα΅)β
my game is giving me trouble and sending a report is literally not working
it was fine a few hours ago, but I need help and I don't know what to do
Hey! So sorry about your game not working. Can you please tell me where in the game you started experiencing the issue or what the report says, since you can't post it?
I feel like Penelope waiting for chapter three to drop
The challenge is waiting for chapter 3 to drop.
Thank god you don't have to wait much longer because it's releasing the 23rd (which is today!!!)
Epic the musical reference ?! π§
OdysseusRamon has come home.i am gonna smooch that old man
YEAH YOU WILL!!!!
Love the game.. Mc in this kinda reminds me as the song " All I ever wanted.." Y'know..heh..the Pattycake one..
wow, the demo rules!! showing the royal family, knights, etc. as blacked-out silhouettes is such a stylish and intriguing choice -- in the same way the protagonist gets lost in their own head about what might be, never seeing these characters' expressions makes me wonder how much negativity (ex: atlas's ulterior motives for bringing them dinner) actually comes from the protagonist's skewed perspective.
also, i've never seen the 'music room' implemented before, the styling is amazing! the OST is great and the song thumbnails are super cute too!
First, I just want to say how good the writing is, I LOVE complex emotions and themes in a story! ALSO, I love how kind of motivating it is as well? It's very understandable why Lysandra hates her brother and holds resentment towards her family overall. I honestly feel bad for both of them in this situation, just a terrible part on the parent's end honestly.
HOWEVER, I LOVE HOW DEEP RAMON'S WORDS HIT. Especially for people who need to hear it. Imagine just hopping on here expecting to play a cool looking story and you're just hit with words and the motivation you needed to hear? (guilty).
But I LOVE this! I love how the characters are written, I love the design of Ramon, I love how deep the writing is, how entertaining it is, I love rooting for Lysandra, and I love the slow romance as well. It's like she feels seen by someone for the first time in her life and its SOOO SWEET! This is one of the few things I've played that can sit right with me and change my perspective on things, even if it doesn't seem that deep (thinking deeply is fun) SO TYSM AND IM EXCITED FOR THE FULL GAME! ^^ (I'm just yapping apt)
I FORGOT TO ADD THAT I HATE THEIR PARENTS THEYRE SO TERRIBLE AND INSENSITIVE. BOOOOO!
Thank you so much for the wonderful, kind words, kitty! When it came to writing Lysandra, I wanted to write a woman conflicted with her familial situation. On one hand, her parents have provided a lot of material things for her and if you do self-insert, don't judge them for queer (the kingdom's very progressive), and food/shelter. These are things she's grateful for.
At the same time, a lot of attention given to Atlas. Her family never gave her that kind of attention, and whenever they spoke of Atlas or the pair, there was always some reminder of MC's "inferiority." She just felt less than all because he was older and the next heir. And they never asked what was wrong, and you can see that when Lysandra's Father spoke to her in Chapter 2. Rather than trying to understand why she didn't eat in the first place, he got upset and reminded her that it made them look bad and that they provide everything for her. The Mother is... interesting because in MC's head, she believes she would say it's okay to give up when times get hard instead of persevering, like she doesn't believe in her.
You'll see more of Atlas in chapter 3 so I won't talk about him. BUT YES RAMON! Ramon is someone that Lysandra needs in her life (and he also needs her) because he gives her the support she's been looking for: he's tough, encouraging, supportive, attentive, a good listener, and knows when to soften up. It's what makes him a great knight and leader: he knows that straight up discipline and constant reprimanding only breaks a person down rather than build them up. He's a good balance.
HAHAHAH!!! The intimacy scenes are quite delicious. As an asexual gal who's written 3 spicy scenes before this game, I'm quite proud of what I wrote for this game because I killed two people on the team with them. π Though I have a huge bias towards the cuddle/ace-friendly option and I think it's JUST AS GOOD IF NOT BETTER!!!
Again, thank you for your kind words. I showed the team what you said and they were so happy after reading your comment and review. π
OFC! and THANK YOU guys for making such a masterpiece! HAHA IM HAPPY MY WORDS BROUGHT THEM HAPPINESS AS WELL! I just love Lysandra's motivation to keep going even if it's hard, and I totally agree with the whole Ramon is a good balance, (forgot to add how I feel bad for Atlas and ty for the clarification ^^). BUT ILL STOP HERE BEFORE I YAP AGAIN, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!! <3<3<3
I love this game so much ! even if it's not the full version it's amazing, i can't for the full release i'm so excited, and Ramon is so handsome ! this game is a 10/10 <3
π₯Ήπ Thank you so much for the wonderful comment! I'm really glad you're loving the game so far. And haha yes, Ramon is SO HANDSOME! Though if you thought he was hot now, just wait until chapter 3...
I canβt wait ! π© When the last chapter is out iβm gonna go crazy
We're aiming to release the last chapter on May 23!
Just finished playing and can't wait for the full release of the game! It's even more exciting the full release comes out on my birthday
Happy early birthday! π₯³ Ramon is going to personally deliver full game to you.
I'm conflicted, I like the game, I can understand why the Mc acts the way they do, but I almost dropped the game a few seconds into playing because of just how much of an annoying brat they act like. I hope they mature and have character growth.
Im a fan of these types of games, the worst part is, is the fact its not done! any updates on when you think it will be done or when the next chapt will be out?
Yep! The final chapter will be released on May 23! :)
awesome! Canβt wait to play it! Will it be much longer then the rest of the chapters ; considering it is the last? :)
Yep! Chapter 3 is 21k words in total while the other two chapters were about 7-8k words each.
hi will there be a android version of this game. Thank you
Hi! An android version of the game will be made available on May 23, the same day the full game is set to release. :)
That's the last day of school for me LMAO - Now I have two things to look forward to
Running out of your final class and right into Ramon's loving embrace. What a way to celebrate the day π₯Ή
Oh heck yes we are so back
RISE FLING WITH A TIEFLING FANS!!! WE ARE SO BACK!!!
THIS IS SO GOOOOOODDD!!!
The relationship between Lysandra and Ramon feels so natural and I looooove how it starts developing into romance!!
I also love Lysandra so much!! The way she's written feels so human; I really like how she can be a bit of an unreliable narrator at times when it comes to her brother, thinking that "he's just pretending to be nice" when in reality it doesn't feel like that at all.
Their parents though? Oh man, they suck!!
I really love how Ramon also makes Lysandra let her mask fall and she doesn't have to pretend with him, she can just be herself!!
I'm really invested in the story and really looking forward to Chapter 3!!
AHHHHH!!! Thank you for playing the demo and for the kind words, Pri. ππ
Glad you're enjoying Ramon and MC's chemistry. When writing them, I really wanted to lean into the guiding aspect and show that BOTH can play that role. You'll see MC take more of that role in chapter 3 as Ramon begins to open up more with her because he feels safe around her (like she does with him) which terrifies him for reasons explained later.
Yes! Atlas is an interesting fellow that's misunderstood by his sister because of the one-sided animosity built up over the years. You'll get a peek into what his life is like in chapter 3. ;)
Super interested in hearing your thoughts on chapter 3 when it drops next month. Thanks again for playing! π
Not done with the game yet, but I can hear him say "Can you lock tf in your highness?"
omg its such peak cant wait for the full version!
us the senior citizen lovers are finally eating good... thank you.... omg..
This is for US
ramon my beloved
He loves you so much.
AHHH such a fun game cant wait to see how it ends!
im so excited to playy!!! looks so cool
<3 I hope ya like it!
i loved it!! i love the fact we can self insert!!