I usually never comment on games to say if they're bad or not. But this game was so terrible I had to say something! The character designs, they're personalities and even the plot was so terrible! I can't imagine actually sitting here and finding this game entertaining. Quite seriously a waste of time.
Hey, I understand how you feel, but the way you worded this was not okay at all. This developer put a lot of hard work into this to make it inclusive (having a black MC) and fun. I understand it's a small demo and a short game, and there wasn't much given to understand what the main plot is, but the way you worded this was just disgusting on your end.
Please, have some self-respect. The drawings, the text and coding took long hours and weeks to progress if you have the cells to understand. If you have something negative and harsh to say, find somewhere else to speak it or even better, keep it to yourself. This was just so rude and shameful to read. Do you understand how this could feel for all the designers and artists who worked hard, fair and equally to progress this game? It gives a sense of zero motivation and just negativity across the community.
This game isn't your local CEO mafia daddy biker game, you want emo hot yandere men? Multiple games fit the stereotypical 'yandere male'; if you were educated enough, this short demo explained how unhealthy and disturbing the reality is of a 'yandere male', not all muscles, clean and rich. The plot is meant to be 'disgusting' because the context is based on the depths of obsession. But you complain.
Before you tell anyone this game is a waste of life, you should get a life first. THANKS!
I feel so bad that you went out of your way to type all of that out because most of their posts are just complaining and hating on games. i'm 90% percent sure they made their account just for that reason.
I feel bad that someone (Princess Butterfly) is such a lowlife of a person, they go out of their way to make fun of someone's creation even tho they can't draw or code for shit.
I'm generally getting bored with the classic yandere but Darius actually made me blush and kick my feet. I love the way his POV is introduced at first. Ready for the full game !!!♥
This was a fun demo! The moment when the lights shut off was an interesting subversion, but didn't really add too much. I DO like the boss though, and how every character is so fleshed out. I wonder if Darius takes a shower before visiting the MC, since no one comments on the fish smell. I can imagine that would get comments, or would get him kicked out of some establishments if he didn't have such a good relationship with the staff (or add to his inferiority for working a 'dirty' or 'low class' job) idk! this was fun to play and i can't wait for more ! !
I can't believe you would do this. Why make me this attached to Tristan, only for me to look at the game page and learn about his imminent death. His banter with Sabrina was so cute. Why... *sobs*.
I already told you this before, but we gotta let the chat know: Darius design is so unique for a Li, especially taking into account the context, it got me like "AHHHH". This is so smart. I also did not expect him to be this pookie. He is seriously adorable, i would have said to protect him at all cost but well...
And i am glad you decided to have Sabrina as the set MC! She is so pretty and basically a ray of sunshine (not to copy Darius). Like wdym i get to take on her role, let's goooo
I LOVE THIS GAME SO MUCH! I'm already hooked, from the gorgeous art and character design to the very cool switching of POVs! I LOVE Dardar already (probably biased because I love characters with bags on their heads) and the MC herself is so pretty and charming! (makes me wanna put purple braids in my hair again and try a nose ring!) I can't WAIT to see more of this game, but I actually CAN wait because a great game is never rushed! Excellent job!!
Sabrina is so cute!! Yay I love seeing black mcs in yandere games ^o^ I love the sound effects too. I watched my fav youtuber, Espoir Du Vide play this since I'm a big scaredy-cat when it comes to games like these. I really like the writing, characters and the art style, can't wait for future updates !
This was a good demo!! I'm hyped for the full release (whenever that may be) and to add this man to my probably concerning hear me out list that never ends within its growing lengths.
Darius was interesting to see his POV through. I was actually worried I'd have to choose what terrible action I'd have to do to our mans (because obviously being sane isn't an option for him /lh), I'm sending you my laundry bill for making me sweat through all my clothes. I liked how while he had that instant obsession, he's actually been waiting for over a YEAR to get himself implanted into MC's life. That he's trying to become a friend, trying to play a game that'll make him liked despite being a lil weirdo, but there's a clear issue standing in his way and seeing blatant affection displayed in front of him is slowly making him snap.
Overall, I'm invested. This scratched an itch I have like a dog with fleas and I feel like I have a cone around me waiting for more. I hope we can see a Tumblr or an ask page open up where fans can ask about the game, characters, development, etc and stay updated if there isn't already one, I am a ball of nd interests bouncing around and collecting more until i explode I need nutrients.
Thank you for assuring there has been no usage of any gen AI in your creations! That made it so much more enjoyable hopping into <3
Hey Chatty! Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, I'm super glad you enjoyed the game. In the extended demo + full game, you'll have control over Darius' actions... somewhat. ;) Your influence on him will lock you out of certain choices, and I'll make sure you're aware of what choices you could've made if better (or worse) decisions were picked as Sabrina.
Yeah! The timeskip I felt like was super necessary to move the story forward naturally. When it came to Darius + Sabrina's relationship, I really wanted it to be like a parasitic growth that slowly takes over your life. Plus, for Sabrina, having him known him for a year makes her less weary to any potential red flags and more open to a relationship. Though that isn't to say she won't outright dismiss any weirdo behavior!
When it comes to a Tumblr, I do have one! It's my personal/game dev one where I allow for asks on any of my projects, so feel free to send questions over! I honestly need to use it more often, so providing updates and getting messages from fans there will definitely help motivate me, haha! https://husbandogoddess.tumblr.com/
And no problem. Gen-AI sucks and I hate it with every fiber of my being. <3
There's nothing wrong with having a set protagonist, but I feel like adding a "remove sprite" option would go a long way, alot of VN readers like to imagine their own MC's so they can enjoy the game a little better.
Where Winter Crows Go is a good example, that also has a great set protagonist MC, but it allows the readers an option and thus allows a greater amount of people to enjoy it :)
Hi Robin! Thank you for your feedback. While I will not implement character customization for a number of reasons, I will look into toggling Sabrina on or off for a future update of the demo. :)
This game is so darn cute!!!!! Darius has so much potential to be creepy but as a Yandere enjoyer I think he's perfect. I thought I wouldn't like Tristan based on the description and appearance on the game page, but I really shouldn't have judged a book by its cover -- Tristan seems like a real sweetheart. 💖💖💖
The little animations and the bag blushie expression and horrified bag expression are too good LOL. How are they so expressive while just being a bag head?!?!
Someone somewhere commented that they bet Darius is a cute anime waifu under that bag and honestly I would like to plus one that comment... the long hair is promising (I'm such a sucker for medium/long hair on men)
Tristan is such a cutie goober though... his relationship with Sabrina/MC is so wholesome and adorable... 😭 I especially enjoyed his innocent doe-eyed expression LOL. Sabrina is also a sweet and likeable protag... but damn, no wonder Darius would get jealous... 🥲🥲🥲 S & T have such a normal, loving relationship... there is no space for Darius in that equation LOL.
The music was very cute, such a great fit, a mix of cute and creepy and romantic ✨️
Darius's monologue about "I should be the one to....!" reminded me of one of my favorite Avicii songs, "I could be the one" LOL 😆
The whole team did such a great job...!!! I can't wait to see the next part! I don't want Darius to kill anyone but at the same time I do?! I feel conflicted LOL but either way, I'm ready for part 2 🫡🫡🫡🔥🔥🔥🔥
I really enjoyed reading this. What a very nice yandere visual novel. Darius is the cringe nice guy we all know and love. Great writing and visuals. Love the boyfriend too super cute!
On a more serious note, I may consider a break-up option but given the game's tone + Darius' motive, simply breaking up with Tristan would remove any level of danger or threat Darius has. So if I were to implement a choice, I'll need to make sure it doesn't change the story too much and will still give Darius a reason to kill him.
What an amazing demo! I very much enjoyed this! Darius is a bit odd wearing a bag over his head but will we get to see what he looks like underneath it? I also worry for Tristan and him going on that trip... Cant wait for the full release!!
AHHH this was amazing!! From start to end I was really hooked and now I totally need more!! 😫❤️❤️
Seeing the events of the story through Darius’ eyes offered a refreshing perspective here, experiencing those feelings of hyperconsciousness and warped idolization morphing into obsession and anger first-hand was something I really liked seeing, and really added to the climbing suspense!
I really like the cast so far! I love how realistic Sabrina feels as a character, Tristan seems really sweet (oh gosh can I handle it if he dies 😂) and there’s just something really endearing about Darius, his clinginess that just seems innocent but is totally hiding an undercurrent of craziness. The tension when Darius meets Tristan was written really well, I could feel myself get nervous and wonder what was going to happen. And OMG the ending and the logo transformation was my favorite part, I can’t wait to know what happens next!! I love this set-up to where we can directly influence the fate of the characters, there’s a lot of potential there! I’m looking forward to the full release ❤️😆
Writing the different POVs were so fun! It makes you think: how would these different characters view the world and characters around them? How can I soften Darius and make him likable in Sabrina's POV, while also maintaining that very real level of danger that surrounds him? I'm very excited to explore this more in the full release. >:)
As for Tristan... Well, let's just say he can live. But your choices will determine that! ;)
This game has such a perfect balance of disturbing spookiness and hilarious goofs. The timing is impeccable and the characters are so charming. I was bouncing between laughing at the interactions and cringing at the gross descriptions.
Thank you so much for playing the demo, Nido! Glad you enjoyed the writing, it was so fun switching from the darker descriptions to light-hearted and fun banter!
I'm so glad you enjoyed the POVs! I knew it was going to be an intriguing mechanic, but I wasn't sure how people were going to react to the opening scene so I'm glad it was a hit!
HELLA! I'm very happy the text sizing came in handy for ya. :D
I love the game so far. This one hits more at home for me working in grocery. When playing I joked about him looking like Dr Flug don't know why though lol. With All jokes aside I love the game and can't wait to see how it goes. I love how expressive Darius is even with a paper bag over his head.
Thank you so much Digital for playing, and for your playthough (feel free to link it in your comment if you want)! I'm 10000% certain that if Darius wasn't a yandere, he would be Dr Flug. He's about as animated as him. XD
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I really liked this demo, can't wait for more!<3
im addicted already omg i cannot wait for more, i didnt expect to like tristan but i do so i cannot wait to see how this ends
por favor continue eu amei
Encontré al dr.flug como yandere!!!!! Se párese mucho!!! Siii!!!🙏❤️😩
PLEASE.add a android version bro............I NEED IT PLEASE
Giggling and kicking my feet at the himbo that is Tristan, literally pure of heart but dumb of ass like, I get you Sabrina, I truly do get you
I usually never comment on games to say if they're bad or not. But this game was so terrible I had to say something! The character designs, they're personalities and even the plot was so terrible! I can't imagine actually sitting here and finding this game entertaining. Quite seriously a waste of time.
Hey, I understand how you feel, but the way you worded this was not okay at all. This developer put a lot of hard work into this to make it inclusive (having a black MC) and fun. I understand it's a small demo and a short game, and there wasn't much given to understand what the main plot is, but the way you worded this was just disgusting on your end.
Please, have some self-respect. The drawings, the text and coding took long hours and weeks to progress if you have the cells to understand. If you have something negative and harsh to say, find somewhere else to speak it or even better, keep it to yourself. This was just so rude and shameful to read. Do you understand how this could feel for all the designers and artists who worked hard, fair and equally to progress this game? It gives a sense of zero motivation and just negativity across the community.
This game isn't your local CEO mafia daddy biker game, you want emo hot yandere men? Multiple games fit the stereotypical 'yandere male'; if you were educated enough, this short demo explained how unhealthy and disturbing the reality is of a 'yandere male', not all muscles, clean and rich. The plot is meant to be 'disgusting' because the context is based on the depths of obsession. But you complain.
Before you tell anyone this game is a waste of life, you should get a life first. THANKS!
I feel so bad that you went out of your way to type all of that out because most of their posts are just complaining and hating on games. i'm 90% percent sure they made their account just for that reason.
I feel bad that someone (Princess Butterfly) is such a lowlife of a person, they go out of their way to make fun of someone's creation even tho they can't draw or code for shit.
"Never comment on games to say if they're bad" Yet your account is full of mindless hating, and typing with grammar issues. simmer down girl
Couldn't help but laugh when I clicked your profile and you almost exclusively leave negative comments
oh hes ummmm cute.. yeah cute thats the word nothing more..
I'm generally getting bored with the classic yandere but Darius actually made me blush and kick my feet. I love the way his POV is introduced at first. Ready for the full game !!!♥
This so peak!!! I can't wait to buy it when its finally done:) I mean I CAN but it'd be kinda boring without my baby girl Darius <3
Great visual novel!
He’s The Stan Eminem Told Us About 😏
First time I see a black protag in a Visual Novel. Will most definitely play this.
error143?? juégalo por favor, es una obra de arte 🙌
i wonder what will come next in the full release
i get darius tbh. i too would kill a man for sabrina <3
This was a fun demo! The moment when the lights shut off was an interesting subversion, but didn't really add too much. I DO like the boss though, and how every character is so fleshed out.
I wonder if Darius takes a shower before visiting the MC, since no one comments on the fish smell. I can imagine that would get comments, or would get him kicked out of some establishments if he didn't have such a good relationship with the staff (or add to his inferiority for working a 'dirty' or 'low class' job)
idk! this was fun to play and i can't wait for more ! !
No no that ain't yandere, that's the freaking JOKER from Persona 2: Eternal Punishment 😆
Cool game, I can't wait for the full release. Darius reminds me of this fighting game character with a bag over his head, haha.
AHHH this game is so good!! I love the art and story!! <3
I can't believe you would do this. Why make me this attached to Tristan, only for me to look at the game page and learn about
his imminent death. His banter with Sabrina was so cute. Why... *sobs*.I already told you this before, but we gotta let the chat know: Darius design is so unique for a Li, especially taking into account the context, it got me like "AHHHH". This is so smart. I also did not expect him to be this pookie. He is seriously adorable, i would have said to protect him at all cost but well...
And i am glad you decided to have Sabrina as the set MC! She is so pretty and basically a ray of sunshine (not to copy Darius). Like wdym i get to take on her role, let's goooo
Where's my android version 😠
hehehehehehe HOI!♫♪
Sabrina is so cute!! Yay I love seeing black mcs in yandere games ^o^ I love the sound effects too. I watched my fav youtuber, Espoir Du Vide play this since I'm a big scaredy-cat when it comes to games like these. I really like the writing, characters and the art style, can't wait for future updates !
This was a good demo!! I'm hyped for the full release (whenever that may be) and to add this man to my probably concerning hear me out list that never ends within its growing lengths.
Darius was interesting to see his POV through. I was actually worried I'd have to choose what terrible action I'd have to do to our mans (because obviously being sane isn't an option for him /lh), I'm sending you my laundry bill for making me sweat through all my clothes. I liked how while he had that instant obsession, he's actually been waiting for over a YEAR to get himself implanted into MC's life. That he's trying to become a friend, trying to play a game that'll make him liked despite being a lil weirdo, but there's a clear issue standing in his way and seeing blatant affection displayed in front of him is slowly making him snap.
Overall, I'm invested. This scratched an itch I have like a dog with fleas and I feel like I have a cone around me waiting for more. I hope we can see a Tumblr or an ask page open up where fans can ask about the game, characters, development, etc and stay updated if there isn't already one, I am a ball of nd interests bouncing around and collecting more until i explode I need nutrients.
Thank you for assuring there has been no usage of any gen AI in your creations! That made it so much more enjoyable hopping into <3
Hey Chatty! Thank you so much for your wonderful comment, I'm super glad you enjoyed the game. In the extended demo + full game, you'll have control over Darius' actions... somewhat. ;) Your influence on him will lock you out of certain choices, and I'll make sure you're aware of what choices you could've made if better (or worse) decisions were picked as Sabrina.
Yeah! The timeskip I felt like was super necessary to move the story forward naturally. When it came to Darius + Sabrina's relationship, I really wanted it to be like a parasitic growth that slowly takes over your life. Plus, for Sabrina, having him known him for a year makes her less weary to any potential red flags and more open to a relationship. Though that isn't to say she won't outright dismiss any weirdo behavior!
When it comes to a Tumblr, I do have one! It's my personal/game dev one where I allow for asks on any of my projects, so feel free to send questions over! I honestly need to use it more often, so providing updates and getting messages from fans there will definitely help motivate me, haha! https://husbandogoddess.tumblr.com/
And no problem. Gen-AI sucks and I hate it with every fiber of my being. <3
i wish we could customize mc
https://itch.io/games/genre-visual-novel/tag-character-customization
thanks
Honestly I agree,
There's nothing wrong with having a set protagonist, but I feel like adding a "remove sprite" option would go a long way, alot of VN readers like to imagine their own MC's so they can enjoy the game a little better.
Where Winter Crows Go is a good example, that also has a great set protagonist MC, but it allows the readers an option and thus allows a greater amount of people to enjoy it :)
Hi Robin! Thank you for your feedback. While I will not implement character customization for a number of reasons, I will look into toggling Sabrina on or off for a future update of the demo. :)
thanks, i didnt mean it in a bad way i just like it when i can customize things
A game with my niches? I'm hooked.
On a serious note, the dialogue felt fluent with how the interactions of the characters go and my god, Darius you bagged bastard.
Demo is good for a solid 20 minutes, which is enough time to have an overview of the characters. Can't wait for what's to come in the future.
This game is so darn cute!!!!! Darius has so much potential to be creepy but as a Yandere enjoyer I think he's perfect. I thought I wouldn't like Tristan based on the description and appearance on the game page, but I really shouldn't have judged a book by its cover -- Tristan seems like a real sweetheart. 💖💖💖
The little animations and the bag blushie expression and horrified bag expression are too good LOL. How are they so expressive while just being a bag head?!?!
Someone somewhere commented that they bet Darius is a cute anime waifu under that bag and honestly I would like to plus one that comment... the long hair is promising (I'm such a sucker for medium/long hair on men)
Tristan is such a cutie goober though... his relationship with Sabrina/MC is so wholesome and adorable... 😭 I especially enjoyed his innocent doe-eyed expression LOL. Sabrina is also a sweet and likeable protag... but damn, no wonder Darius would get jealous... 🥲🥲🥲 S & T have such a normal, loving relationship... there is no space for Darius in that equation LOL.
The music was very cute, such a great fit, a mix of cute and creepy and romantic ✨️
Darius's monologue about "I should be the one to....!" reminded me of one of my favorite Avicii songs, "I could be the one" LOL 😆
The whole team did such a great job...!!! I can't wait to see the next part! I don't want Darius to kill anyone but at the same time I do?! I feel conflicted LOL but either way, I'm ready for part 2 🫡🫡🫡🔥🔥🔥🔥
I really enjoyed reading this. What a very nice yandere visual novel. Darius is the cringe nice guy we all know and love. Great writing and visuals. Love the boyfriend too super cute!
Thank you so much for playing and for making a video on the game! :) Glad you enjoyed the demo, and I hope you cover the full game when it releases.
I hope to as well! Thank you for responding! Awesome game!
спасибо за главную героиню девушку
No offense towards the guy, but, is there an option to break up with Tristan if you like Darius more?
Break-up via murder.
On a more serious note, I may consider a break-up option but given the game's tone + Darius' motive, simply breaking up with Tristan would remove any level of danger or threat Darius has. So if I were to implement a choice, I'll need to make sure it doesn't change the story too much and will still give Darius a reason to kill him.
Awesome! That would be so great! ^_^
i love thiss!!
Thank you! So happy you liked it! :D
I loved seeing the little differences in text/dialogue due to the choices. Protagonist is awesome
Thank you so much for playing! <3 Glad you enjoyed it, Zang!
AHHH this was amazing!! From start to end I was really hooked and now I totally need more!! 😫❤️❤️
Seeing the events of the story through Darius’ eyes offered a refreshing perspective here, experiencing those feelings of hyperconsciousness and warped idolization morphing into obsession and anger first-hand was something I really liked seeing, and really added to the climbing suspense!
I really like the cast so far! I love how realistic Sabrina feels as a character, Tristan seems really sweet (oh gosh can I handle it if he dies 😂) and there’s just something really endearing about Darius, his clinginess that just seems innocent but is totally hiding an undercurrent of craziness. The tension when Darius meets Tristan was written really well, I could feel myself get nervous and wonder what was going to happen. And OMG the ending and the logo transformation was my favorite part, I can’t wait to know what happens next!! I love this set-up to where we can directly influence the fate of the characters, there’s a lot of potential there! I’m looking forward to the full release ❤️😆
I just need to say, you don't know how much I love this review. 😭😭😭❤️❤️.
AHHHH SUDACHYS!!!! I'm so glad y'all enjoyed it!
Writing the different POVs were so fun! It makes you think: how would these different characters view the world and characters around them? How can I soften Darius and make him likable in Sabrina's POV, while also maintaining that very real level of danger that surrounds him? I'm very excited to explore this more in the full release. >:)
As for Tristan... Well, let's just say he can live. But your choices will determine that! ;)
This game has such a perfect balance of disturbing spookiness and hilarious goofs. The timing is impeccable and the characters are so charming. I was bouncing between laughing at the interactions and cringing at the gross descriptions.
Thank you so much for playing the demo, Nido! Glad you enjoyed the writing, it was so fun switching from the darker descriptions to light-hearted and fun banter!
Hi, are you interested in an Italian or Japanese localization?
I'd help for free since I am trying to get experience in the field! 😊
The switching of the POVs is soooo cool, seeing the emotions directly from Darious's perspective is super interesting.
The art, the GUI (with all the accessibility features, as someone who can't read font well the text sizing option was awesome) all of it is so amazing
I can't wait to see more :0
I'm so glad you enjoyed the POVs! I knew it was going to be an intriguing mechanic, but I wasn't sure how people were going to react to the opening scene so I'm glad it was a hit!
HELLA! I'm very happy the text sizing came in handy for ya. :D
I love the game so far. This one hits more at home for me working in grocery. When playing I joked about him looking like Dr Flug don't know why though lol. With All jokes aside I love the game and can't wait to see how it goes. I love how expressive Darius is even with a paper bag over his head.
Thank you so much Digital for playing, and for your playthough (feel free to link it in your comment if you want)! I'm 10000% certain that if Darius wasn't a yandere, he would be Dr Flug. He's about as animated as him. XD
will do and I can't wait to see what happens net